Sequence-Time Stood Still

just for a moment nothing mattered- in the silence,quietness stirs impressions of summer- whisper in the breeze

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Sharon Winter

Date: 11/30/2009 9:13:00 AM

Heavenly mood here Brian, I sense it deeply. Warmest thanks for your thoughtful congrats. You are never far away from me in spirit. Hugs for you, shar xoxo

Marty Owens

Date: 11/28/2009 6:19:00 PM

Very Nice...Enjoyed...Marty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/28/2009 1:15:00 PM

Nicely penned in a few words that are very descriptive and expressive. Thanks for answers about your meal. Still do not know if there is a meat that you can compare mutton. Thank you for the comments on my work. I may enter my Acrostic in the contest since it doesnt' have to rhyme. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

John Freeman

Date: 11/28/2009 12:07:00 PM

Awesome Monoku, fall is my time of the year, with the mild temp. just befor winter sets in.Sincerely, Moses

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/28/2009 5:27:00 AM

gentle, soft feel, nice! Brian! jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/28/2009 5:26:00 AM

Well its absolutely frigid here in New Jersey today so I am enjoying the warmth of your Monoku this morning... luv those summer breezes that whisper... enjoyed.... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/28/2009 12:59:00 AM

i wish the time stood still,i wish for summer,that sweet whisper in the breeze..A GEM--Charma