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Sequence-Swallow Me,Swallow

southwards to the sun- follow the light, annual migration's begun- nomads of nowhere, without a care baggage,passports or cheap airfare

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James Peranteau

Date: 9/14/2009 12:08:00 PM

Well,...you have describe what I call,...you better take pictures of them now while they last shots !!!! *smiles* Great picture Brian !!! james

Elaine George

Date: 9/14/2009 1:26:00 AM

Ah! If I only had wings. Good one, Brian. Thank you for sharing. lainie

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/13/2009 1:09:00 PM

Gentle, flowing and perfect in form. I love the beautiful images it creates. It makes me want to join them in there flight. As always, thank you for your kind words and sharing. Love, Robin

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/13/2009 10:28:00 AM

Wonderful poem Brian - i loved this one - a favorite - Could you please check my new post colors and let me know if they meet the guidelines for your new contest - as I understand you'll post two more blogs referring to the contest and then we add to this poem making one poem out of three - Is that correct? - Is your newest blog part of the contest or is it separate? Sorry for the confusion Brian - God Bless, your friend Michael

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 9/13/2009 8:57:00 AM

i agree with carolyn..., the "snowbirds" from up North will be flocking to Florida before the first winter chill. And many of the birds have already arrived "without a care, baggage, passports or cheap airfare." waht a great piece! love and thanks i got your soupmail

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/13/2009 5:44:00 AM

Yes, the "snowbirds" from up North will be flocking to Florida before the first winter chill. And many of the birds have already arrived "without a care, baggage, passports or cheap airfare." Delightful read! Love, carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/13/2009 4:05:00 AM

Carefree, a design of God. Of course not totally carefree but it is nice to dream on catching those currents and flying high or being a migrating fish that follows the ocean currents to the other place for another season. Nicely done in a few short words. Brings thoughts that can relax. My elevated blood pressure probably went down. Keep writing. Sara

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/13/2009 2:36:00 AM

"nomads of nowhere" this stuck out to me, nice work...Raul

Donna Golden

Date: 9/13/2009 1:49:00 AM

And Solomon in his regal garments had not their wealth. This piece made me smile, Brian! Thanks for shaing your gifts and insightS, and for your constant support. Blessings, Donna