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Sequence-Sounds Off-Summer

blackbirds sqwark and cluck hungry magpies try their luck- fledglings hide,dumbstruck leather sounds on bat spectators,politely clap- outfielders,idly chat children,outdoors stay on imagination's freeway- hours in dreamland,play pigeons coo like doves the mistlethrush sings above- hello,my lady-love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/10/2009 8:26:00 PM
What beutiful music the summer makes and what a tune you play from your gifted pen Brian, this is EXTRAORDINARY!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/10/2009 11:13:00 AM
Awesome work Brian..you just took the haiku genre to another level...just when I was going to try and write some, you just made it harder.LOL...good work.
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Date: 6/10/2009 5:57:00 AM
Comforting familiar thoughts that soothe this reader. Each verse a completely different but equally enjoyable image of sight and sound. Love, Shar
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Date: 6/10/2009 5:39:00 AM
Brian, you have a way with summer sounds and Haiku. I truly enjoyed reading this. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/10/2009 4:01:00 AM
very enjoyable and well written
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