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Sequence-Sensations

A famous work of art- drive ambitions part, a moving story-line travels down our spine- to flowers of the field, heart-filled beauty yields- on love's sure foundation- a family builds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2009 4:21:00 PM
Interesting work here. Thanks for the comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/4/2009 8:37:00 AM
I love the flow of these words, one wants to rush, and then must go back again. You are as always, an inspiration.
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Date: 10/4/2009 4:12:00 AM
Definitly a sequence of beautiful sensations. Thank you for sharing, Brian. Lainie
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Date: 10/4/2009 3:52:00 AM
I love how this sequence flows, Brian. This is filled with such wonderful sentiment! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/3/2009 7:37:00 AM
Beautiful sentiments Brian. Love the words, on love's ure foundation...Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 10/3/2009 7:36:00 AM
Oh my,.... I do believe this is one of my very favorites, ever, from your poetry! Truly beautiful....straight into my favorites...! Just wonderful! ~ Great work, Brian!! ~ Carrie
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