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Sequence-Mood Change

Grey clouds above- the sunshine hides 'neath the duvet.. so, so tired ebbs the tide.. of enertia: a call, a word in season- flowers deep within and hope alights again on optimism's tree.

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Sharon Winter

Date: 5/25/2009 6:34:00 AM

Warmest congrats Brian on your most excellent and well deserved win in Michael's contest! Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/24/2009 1:25:00 PM

Congrats Brian in you big win in the contest...Raul

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/24/2009 12:28:00 PM

A delightful winning poem, Brian !!!Congratulations on your win in Michael's Contest !!! Love, Carrie

Emily Kroeger

Date: 4/24/2009 8:40:00 AM

aww pretty

Charlene Bird

Date: 4/23/2009 12:05:00 PM

A very lovely piece of artistery here Brian. Thank you for commenting on my work Always appreciated

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/23/2009 8:12:00 AM

I love the hope that peeks out of the cloudy first words of this poem. Inspiring! ~ Best wishes, Carrie

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/23/2009 6:54:00 AM

Such a powerful write. This one is a reminder that life has endless possibilities because in faith there is always the opportunity for change. Great writing and for introducing me to yet another beautiful form. Smiles from Lolita

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/23/2009 6:10:00 AM

Well, I can relate to this beautifully expressed poem. Love this form, you do wonders with. (Enjoying the book Brian, it is awesome.) Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/23/2009 4:42:00 AM

wonderfully stated...message conveyed. Thanks for your comments Brian.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/23/2009 4:10:00 AM

Brian, your creative ability to express intense emotions with 1 or 2 word lines is amazing! Jim