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Sequence-In England Seen Today

The pussy-willow,golden yellow bathed in sunlight,oh so mellow Daffodils nodding in the breeze, as early birds canoodle in trees below zero nights of snow flakes become icicle delights in daylight

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Date: 3/11/2010 6:18:00 PM
Great write Brian..was checking out the Crystalline form of poetry and went right to the Master Poet here.. enjoyed and thankxxx ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/26/2010 7:10:00 PM
sounds beautiful and like spring!!
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Date: 2/22/2010 1:39:00 PM
cute line, canoodle in trees!! thanks for your comment today. LUv, andrea
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:11:00 AM
This is picture perfect! Sounds like wonderful inspiration for your artistic talents...it is no wonder you are a painter! Lovely poem, Brian!
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Date: 2/22/2010 8:57:00 AM
It is amazing how the early flowers and buds can withstand what seems too cold weather for them to survive. The end rhyme are very good. Keep the creative pen flowing. My poem about the bowling was metaphoric language for a thunder and lighting storm. The dog was real. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. It made my day. Sara
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Date: 2/22/2010 8:50:00 AM
Descriptive scene in your lines Brian.. felt as if I looked out my window I might see across the many miles between us.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/22/2010 8:34:00 AM
Can picture it!
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Date: 2/22/2010 8:32:00 AM
Awesome flow.. Good form my friend... :JP]
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