Sequence-Graduation Ball

footsteps in the street- echos of distant youth the fridge motor hums- night starvation comes home

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2010 1:55:00 PM

When we were young that hunger and appetite was always calling..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/8/2010 5:12:00 AM

We can all reflect on our distant youth, especially if it was a great time in life for us.. and your last two lines bring the reality of it all home.... enjoyed Brian..luv.. Linda-Marie

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 3/7/2010 12:14:00 AM

yes yes, to excited or who knows what happened at the dance that you didn't touch a thing to snack on! obviously way to many thing happen. very nice monoku, i didn't have a ball but makes me think of related things.