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Septimal-Ephemeral

a one-off- performance art

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/24/2009 3:30:00 PM
Brian I like it thanks for teaching me new forms ! Love Laura :)
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Date: 1/24/2009 11:32:00 AM
How is this Imagism? If you simply use 7 syllables that may make it septimal & if "one" is what you attribute to ephemeral, perhaps "knock" would be better than one. This verse has no blood. Bleed into it. Debbie
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Date: 1/24/2009 8:21:00 AM
Very clever! Reading these are a good sharpening tool for my wit! Thank you for sharing. Love, Robin
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