Satin Sheet

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~~ dappled is the room the only sound soft whispers . . . . . . satin sheet on floor ________________________ February 24, 2015 Poetry/Senryu/satin sheet Copyright Protected, ID 02-643-258-24 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2015 5:56:00 PM

I love this one, Constance, from the title down to the satin sheet on the floor.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/1/2015 3:20:00 PM

Sensual in a very few words ..Reads like a winner to me.. Way to go for the contest ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/24/2015 11:26:00 PM

Beautiful my friend. you have captured the essence of the form with these few words to paint a picture of love. love Shane xxx

David Meade

Date: 2/24/2015 2:20:00 PM

Delightful -- my imagination is in overtime!! A perfect Senryu that captures the heat of love.

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/24/2015 12:52:00 PM

Beautiful image expressed with the heart of a poet. Emile. #7

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/24/2015 10:13:00 AM

Subtle and sexy!