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Senryu - Forgiveness

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Lord when I am hurt I am a dying flower- s t r e n g t h will be stronger I will raise my head and look at my tormentors- w i s d o m is wiser I will FORGIVE those who stab my heart with daggers- f o r g i v e n e s s is growth _____________________ August 17, 2016 Poetry/Senryu/un-traditional/forgiveness Copyright Protected, ID 16-819-190-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Forgiveness Senryu Sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Jack Horne

Date: 8/23/2016 3:59:00 PM

oh, powerful piece indeed & just beautiful

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/23/2016 12:09:00 PM

Wonderful piece of work..Congrats on your win...well deserved...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2016 2:00:00 AM

Congratulations Constnce on your first place win. Lovely! 7 ; )

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/21/2016 4:47:00 PM

BW, lovely 'forgiveness' Senryu. Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2016 1:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/21/2016 1:40:00 PM

Congratulations BW...

Lu Loo

Date: 8/21/2016 10:27:00 AM

Broken Wings, so beautiful lady with the best layout in the contest..you have such a wonderful gift from your hand...congrats on your top win and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

James Inman

Date: 8/19/2016 7:03:00 AM

Very nicely written, with deep meaning.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/18/2016 12:00:00 PM

Lovely message in so few words - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Ainsley

Date: 8/18/2016 9:18:00 AM

We don't learn much when things are rolling along,but a detour or breakdown dose wonders to make you stop and think and advance to the next surprise . We human beings are an interesting bunch!Thank You.May your sharp mind and full heart mend your Wings so you can fly high again.