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Senryu 8-1-2016

Senryu 8/1/2016 strings fray slowly puppeteers ignore life’s failing steps John G. Lawless

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Date: 8/3/2016 7:01:00 AM
Profoundly GREAT work, John, and thanks for your thoughts.
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Date: 8/2/2016 11:55:00 PM
Very deep, John, Pupeteers often prove an effective device in Poetry. Sinister. Nice Senryu. Regards, Viv
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Date: 8/1/2016 9:08:00 PM
Nice Senryu John...some deep meaning
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John Lawless
Date: 8/2/2016 8:34:00 AM
There is some deep reflection in this one as you say.

Book: Shattered Sighs