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Decay

life is but nothing when health has gone to decay - a passion for death ____________________________________ September 1, 2013 Poetry/Senryu/decay Copyright Protected, ID 09-502-880-01 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

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Kash Poet

Date: 12/8/2013 7:58:00 AM

So true Constance.I have sent you a soupmail.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2013 5:08:00 PM

Constance, this had to be one of my very favorites on the list. BIG congrats for your win.

Seren Roberts

Date: 9/23/2013 12:57:00 AM

Congratulations ....Seren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/22/2013 9:35:00 PM

You moved me with such few words. Congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2013 8:42:00 PM

congratulations...Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/22/2013 6:43:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/21/2013 3:25:00 PM

Quite a somber write Broken wing; I guess points here Have been considered by many; a lot in this poem congrats on the win..'

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/21/2013 9:11:00 AM

This indeed has a powerful message! But so true! Sad but true........ Congratulations on your well deserved win!

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/21/2013 8:55:00 AM

so very true, I have seen this in terminally ill loved ones....good write, powerful senryu...congrats on your win :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/21/2013 7:55:00 AM

Connie congrats on being placed Shadow x smile

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/21/2013 7:17:00 AM

Congrats on the win with this Senryu. You have taken it very lightly, Broken Wings

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/17/2013 10:50:00 AM

Tough one to read Donna dear Donna! An excellent entry into the doctor's contest! Good luck! Love ya, Jack xoxoxox

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2013 6:15:00 PM

oh my, THAT Is a great way to put it. I can so well understand a person feeling this way now that I have grown familiar with aches and pains!! very nice, Constance.

Jack Horne

Date: 9/6/2013 1:47:00 PM

wow, very powerful write here, Constance

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2013 9:30:00 PM

Thanks for the entry,

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/1/2013 4:44:00 PM

This write is so very true, I understand this well when I saw my grandmother decay in her health...which led eventually to her death! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a powerful message you present within this piece, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/1/2013 2:57:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in Dr. Ram's contest..Thanks for placing my poem in the winners' list in your contest..It is an honor to be listed there..This poem made me think about your health..How are you doing..Sara