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Senryu 7-9-2016

Senryu 7-9-2016 take one Winds merry-go-round chasing the dreams of clouds stirring the pot ---------------------------------------------------- take two Winds merry-go-round chasing the dreams of clouds stirring the poet John G. Lawless 7/9/2016

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/10/2016 12:30:00 PM

I like! CayCay

John Lawless
Date: 7/10/2016 8:37:00 PM

Thanks CayCay, the haiku/senryu wet paint sign keeps tempting me to test it one more time.

Tim Smith

Date: 7/10/2016 7:41:00 AM

Excellent John. I really love the second...it has multiple layers. One of the first true Senyru I have seen.

John Lawless
Date: 7/10/2016 8:10:00 AM

Tim, it was a true Senryu when written as the word poet was an inadvertent typo or a muse induced correction. Thanks for stopping by.