Senryu 7-7-2016

Senryu 7-7-2016 ancients vision searching for fulfillment stone polished sand John G. Lawless 7/7/2016

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Karam Misra

Date: 7/8/2016 9:33:00 PM

I've visited your poem four times, and each time I get a new insight with your last line - it is so striking! Sometimes I hold and caress a sand polished stone, at other times I am baffled by the stone polishing the - sand? Quite intriguing. ~karam~

John Lawless
Date: 7/9/2016 9:28:00 PM

Karam, I count that the highest of compliments when the reader has to return many times...each time gaining new insights.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2016 6:09:00 PM

I really like it and the clever title!

John Lawless
Date: 7/9/2016 9:27:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, they keep drawing me back...these pesky forms.

Skat A

Date: 7/8/2016 1:15:00 PM

enjoyed your senryu John, thank you for sharing, **LUV SKAT**

John Lawless
Date: 7/9/2016 9:27:00 PM

Thanks Skat