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Senryu - Beloved

tears falling on stone my hair a cloak of sadness - all the beloved ________________________ November 24, 2012 Poetry/Senryu/beloved Copyright Protected, ID 11-438-172-24 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/3/2012 9:24:00 AM

memories of sorrow .. another thing we share .. elegant words profoundly penned luv .. even in sadness .. they shine bright ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2012 8:25:00 AM

a day in the cemetery. No better way to convey the feelings in a senryu than this.

Jack Horne

Date: 11/25/2012 7:08:00 AM

beautiful senyru, my friend. I hope you are having a great day : )

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/24/2012 10:32:00 PM

What a striking and amazing write my friend! Awesome portrayal of sadness with this poem! Very nicely done Constance, Great Work!!

Nicole Marrier

Date: 11/24/2012 4:39:00 PM

beautiful poem constance.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/24/2012 4:01:00 PM

You write with your heart Constance, just gorgeous. - Have a lovely weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/24/2012 3:55:00 PM

I havn't tryed one of these, it is beautiful. Is the stone his heart???