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Senryu 2 - Child Born

A virgin gives birth God's Son clothed in human flesh --- Bethlehem sleeps 12/7/2011 for Brian Strand's any 3-line contest.

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Date: 12/10/2011 5:42:00 PM

wow, this really worked well in senryu form. As Bethlehem sleeps That was awesome!!!

Date: 12/8/2011 7:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win,Kim!

Date: 12/7/2011 3:59:00 PM

God is good, man weeps, great poetry here ...

Date: 12/7/2011 3:09:00 PM

Great triplet, Kim....these spiritual writes at Christmas make my heart leap for joy! Congrats to u, Love, Gwendolen

Date: 12/7/2011 11:52:00 AM

Kim congrats on your win..David

Date: 12/7/2011 11:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Triplet" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Date: 12/7/2011 10:58:00 AM

Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Date: 12/7/2011 9:46:00 AM

Excellent thinking behind this poem.Congrats on your win Kim.

Date: 12/7/2011 9:44:00 AM

So Beautiful and Meaningful. Well done my friend. Excellent piece. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB

Date: 12/7/2011 6:50:00 AM

The best to you in Brian's contest Kim. Myself I love this poem. Love, Carol

Date: 12/6/2011 11:08:00 PM

Kim, good luck in the contest.~ENJOYED.. thank you for sharing your wonderful haiku* ;-) Have yourself a very lovely day, always,..p.d.

Date: 12/6/2011 11:59:00 AM

Great poem........George