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damaged and ruined my wings are destroyed broken- you just turn away ______________________ July 29, 2015 Poetry/Senryu/broken Copyright Protected, ID 15- 695-723-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 7/30/2015 9:01:00 AM
Sorry I'm taking up so much of your time commenting on your poems but they are wonderful. This one is particularly powerful.
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Date: 7/29/2015 8:51:00 PM
oh how powerful and sad Broken Wings:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/29/2015 8:34:00 PM
Simple and memorable
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