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Senryu - Weeping

deep in the forest the butterfly is weeping her heart is broken ______________________ July 2, 2015 Poetry/Senryu/weeping Copyright Protected, ID 15-686-097-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 4/5/2020 1:02:00 PM
I love this, BW, such emotion and beuatiful imagery.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2020 6:03:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting and for the compliment _Constance
Date: 7/4/2015 7:38:00 PM
Oh....it is a sad think when a butterfly's heart is crushed, BW. Lovely senryu...for sadness has it's part in life as well. Hugs
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Date: 7/4/2015 4:46:00 PM
lovely integration of words and image
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Date: 7/3/2015 11:35:00 PM
I love this great SENRYU!
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Date: 7/2/2015 10:50:00 PM
Nice one, Constance. Love seeing it with the picture.
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Date: 7/2/2015 7:53:00 PM
sad imagery. Love the senryu. LINDA
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