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Senryu 007

writing a sad poem while you keep breaking my heart... I will hold the pen. © Harry J Horsman 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/15/2012 10:05:00 AM
Harry; I hope that your heart don't get totally broken. My moms' birthday was june 24th. She passed away this last September. have a great day and smile. Lucilla
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Date: 12/13/2012 1:55:00 PM
Sad, but an enjoyable read.
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Date: 12/11/2012 7:48:00 AM
strong emotions indeed. Warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 12/10/2012 11:52:00 PM
Very deep meaningful write. Nice senryu. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 12/10/2012 9:48:00 PM
Harry, a sad thought... hopefully it is only a senryu, i do not like the image of your heart all broken....pd
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Date: 12/10/2012 1:57:00 PM
Harry, love it so much, I love writing sad poems, O, I wonder why? Constance
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Date: 12/9/2012 3:23:00 PM
The pen holds all emotions happy or sad. Nicely done. love phyl
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Date: 12/9/2012 11:20:00 AM
Good one harry! Light & Love
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Date: 12/9/2012 9:20:00 AM
And with each word you write your healing happens ;) gosh Harry I absolutely dig this write of yours. Hope you and your family are doing okay. Love Wilma
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:59:00 AM
wow, this one is so good, Harry
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:50:00 AM
This one is too good my friend. Outstanding and brilliantly composed lines. A superb Haiku from your crafted pen and thank you for your continued interest in my series love story Tesu. Love and best wishes....Ravindra....Harry Horsman
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:39:00 AM
Keep holding and writing with that pen. Great poets are borne from great emotion. Wishing you the very best.
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Date: 12/9/2012 5:53:00 AM
The pen might seem difficult to hold .... in sorrow. - BRAVO HARRY! - - Have a nice Sunday. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/9/2012 2:38:00 AM
This is very emotional and heartbreaking. Giving a person so much power...Thanks for your lovely comments..you are the best! Hugs, Holly
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Date: 12/9/2012 2:36:00 AM
A great Senryu here Harry!Love this.
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Date: 12/8/2012 6:49:00 PM
Can I giggle? The last line is superb!
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Date: 12/8/2012 5:14:00 PM
soupmail for ya
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Date: 12/8/2012 12:35:00 PM
pondering thoughts love this...
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Date: 12/8/2012 12:05:00 PM
I LOVE this one. It's a perfectly crafted senryu!!
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Date: 12/8/2012 11:49:00 AM
Been there and lived that my friend... well expressed piece... Michael
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Date: 12/8/2012 11:47:00 AM
Ahhh!!I hope not true..Great expressive work..I really like this one..Thanks for the review of my work..The one about the fisherman was strickly imagination..Sara
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Date: 12/8/2012 11:29:00 AM
Nicely done Harry,my pen has never let me down, blessings, Carl
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Date: 12/8/2012 9:16:00 AM
nice write Harry... best wishes
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Date: 12/8/2012 9:13:00 AM
deep one harry xx
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Date: 12/8/2012 9:06:00 AM
Quite thought provoking, Harry, nice effort!! Jag
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