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Senryu 007

writing a sad poem
while you keep breaking my heart...
I will hold the pen.

© Harry J Horsman 2012

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 12/15/2012 10:05:00 AM

Harry; I hope that your heart don't get totally broken. My moms' birthday was june 24th. She passed away this last September. have a great day and smile. Lucilla

Frank Polgar

Date: 12/13/2012 1:55:00 PM

Sad, but an enjoyable read.

Ralph Mason

Date: 12/11/2012 7:48:00 AM

strong emotions indeed. Warm thoughts, Ralph

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/10/2012 11:52:00 PM

Very deep meaningful write. Nice senryu. Enjoyed. Tfs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 9:48:00 PM

Harry, a sad thought... hopefully it is only a senryu, i do not like the image of your heart all broken....pd

Constance La France

Date: 12/10/2012 1:57:00 PM

Harry, love it so much, I love writing sad poems, O, I wonder why? Constance

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/9/2012 3:23:00 PM

The pen holds all emotions happy or sad. Nicely done. love phyl

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/9/2012 11:20:00 AM

Good one harry! Light & Love

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/9/2012 9:20:00 AM

And with each word you write your healing happens ;) gosh Harry I absolutely dig this write of yours. Hope you and your family are doing okay. Love Wilma

Jack Horne

Date: 12/9/2012 6:59:00 AM

wow, this one is so good, Harry

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 12/9/2012 6:50:00 AM

This one is too good my friend. Outstanding and brilliantly composed lines. A superb Haiku from your crafted pen and thank you for your continued interest in my series love story Tesu. Love and best wishes....Ravindra....Harry Horsman

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/9/2012 6:39:00 AM

Keep holding and writing with that pen. Great poets are borne from great emotion. Wishing you the very best.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/9/2012 5:53:00 AM

The pen might seem difficult to hold .... in sorrow. - BRAVO HARRY! - - Have a nice Sunday. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Holly Moore

Date: 12/9/2012 2:38:00 AM

This is very emotional and heartbreaking. Giving a person so much power...Thanks for your lovely comments..you are the best! Hugs, Holly

Kash Poet

Date: 12/9/2012 2:36:00 AM

A great Senryu here Harry!Love this.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/8/2012 6:49:00 PM

Can I giggle? The last line is superb!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2012 5:14:00 PM

soupmail for ya

Annie Lander

Date: 12/8/2012 12:35:00 PM

pondering thoughts love this...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2012 12:05:00 PM

I LOVE this one. It's a perfectly crafted senryu!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/8/2012 11:49:00 AM

Been there and lived that my friend... well expressed piece... Michael

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/8/2012 11:47:00 AM

Ahhh!!I hope not true..Great expressive work..I really like this one..Thanks for the review of my work..The one about the fisherman was strickly imagination..Sara