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Self-Service Car Wash

Slide your quarters, grab the hose. (Point away from eyes and nose.) Power spray to loosen dirt; One more time now wouldn't hurt. Grasp the soap brush - scrub that foam; Top to bottom - almost home. Coat the roof if you have wet it; If you're short - well, just forget it. Timer's ticking - spritz some water. Uh oh - better add a quarter. Watch those suds as they come pooling; Almost done, but who you fooling? Though the car looks slightly better, Mostly it's just much much wetter!

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Date: 5/10/2015 12:03:00 PM
Ilene, good one.SKAT
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/11/2015 3:54:00 PM
thank you, skat!
Date: 5/10/2015 10:24:00 AM
lol...it will probably rain too...lovely Tim
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/11/2015 3:54:00 PM
ha! yes, i forgot about the rain. that's a given! thanks, tim...
Date: 5/9/2015 9:19:00 PM
Oh my gosh. This is a total gem ilene. You captured the pace and the panic perfectly. Enjoyed. :)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/11/2015 3:53:00 PM
thank you, robert! i figured that lots of people could relate to this one and i appreciate your comment, as always...
Date: 5/9/2015 4:04:00 PM
I just wash my car at home with a bucket of water and a sponge never been to a car wash ever:-) great write as ever:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/11/2015 3:53:00 PM
good for you! i can't really do that, living in the city, but i try to find the places where i can at least do it myself. thanks for reading, jan...

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