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See No Evil - Ten Word Challenge

The halcyon days of my youth were full of exuberant teenagers, with a fire built and music blaring they, danced under the crepuscular light, with loud drunken sonorous, much to the annoyance of the local opulent farmer who, was cynical about the drunks not moving from his land, then an eerie Penumbra silenced the drunks, they sensed a visceral fear of change among them, while they sat in a desultory mess, jealousy was not too far behind. Zoe Pashley 01/ 02/2016

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Date: 2/6/2016 10:07:00 AM
Thank you all :)
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Date: 2/6/2016 9:37:00 AM
Zoe, Congratulations on your "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil" ten-word challenge WIN!" Love LINDA
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Date: 2/2/2016 10:44:00 PM
Hi Zoe,, Congrats on your ten-word challenge WIN. ** SKAT **
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Date: 2/2/2016 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/2/2016 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations on a nice placement in this contest, Zoe...well done.
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Date: 2/2/2016 9:15:00 AM
Interesting subject, Zoe. Nicely written.
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Date: 2/1/2016 9:09:00 AM
Well done, Zoe. Some challenging words indeed and you have mastered them wonderfully. Sounds exactly like some of my memories of youth. Really nice.
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