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Seasonal Gifts That Give Me Pleasure

In Winter it's a new laid blanket of snow-- pristine, immaculate, innocent...holy. Spring brings a softer air, at once both fecund and perfumed, and wildflowers leap into life, and trees are reborn in gradients of green, and life is temperate, gentle, fragile, caught dangling between two brutes. Summer feeds me: passion-hued strawberries, fat blueberries, corn- on-the-cob fit for kings and queens, while fireflies dance and crickets sing for our secret and quiet pleasure. Now Autumn is different-- a season to glory death and singe our unseen immortal parts awake. The trees shed their technicolor tears to lay a carpet of sadness: by far the bravest season.

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Date: 3/11/2022 9:29:00 PM
Seasons, surely give us pleasure. Very beautifully written. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/12/2022 10:53:00 AM
Thank you my friend!!!
Date: 7/2/2021 9:45:00 AM
Just lovely LJ! What beautiful "gifts" you highlight in amazing images - "technicolor tears," "passion-hued," "caught dangling." Wonderful use of words. Your poem captures the flow of the days moving effortlessly season to season. Congratulations on your win!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/12/2022 10:52:00 AM
Thanks Sam--that's extra-special coming from you, my friend!
Date: 7/2/2021 8:10:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/27/2021 4:29:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one. Congrats on this winner. Sara
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/27/2021 9:21:00 AM
Thank you, Sara
Date: 2/23/2021 3:21:00 PM
LJ, I love your poem of seasons, so many great lines, congratulations on your win _Constance
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/24/2021 7:07:00 AM
Thank you Constance, it is very much appreciated!
Date: 2/23/2021 6:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win, LJ ~ well penned
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/23/2021 7:36:00 AM
Thank you Line!
Date: 4/30/2018 10:48:00 PM
Delightful. Well done, L.J. Congrats.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/1/2018 1:30:00 PM
Thanks, Line, I'm glad you liked it
Date: 4/29/2018 7:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement win. A beautiful well-written spring and seasonal poem. Enjoyed.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/30/2018 8:33:00 AM
Thank you, Susan, I'm very happy that you liked it!
Date: 4/29/2018 5:10:00 PM
A lovely foray through the seasons. My daughter made blueberry cobbler from fresh picked blueberries a couple of days ago. It was refreshing, as was your poem.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/30/2018 8:36:00 AM
Oh, how I love blueberry cobbler! So you gave me one of the highest of compliments--thanks, James.
Date: 4/13/2017 5:28:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, len. There are wonderful things in each season. Congrats on your placement. I like your imagery.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/13/2017 5:30:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes-- I liked your poem to, which I had just read as it happens!
Date: 1/2/2015 3:56:00 AM
Nice one, congrats Len...huggs
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Date: 1/1/2015 7:03:00 PM
such vivid description of our amazing seasons - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/1/2015 6:55:00 PM
LEN, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda
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