Seaside Stroll

The sound of the sea at the shore,
is a constant whisper-roar. 
The sharp cry of  a sea- gull,
punctuates it for me.  
A breeze brings the scent of salt,
and brushes my skin, 
playing havoc with my hair.
I feel the softness of the sand,
the icy coolness of waves at my feet,
and the sandy grit between my toes.

I sense freedom all around me,
as I see, scantily clad people,
diving into waves, walking into the wind,
talking in groups, and bathing in warm sunlight.

Their voices are carried to me,
as a soft babble,
with laughter, and squeals of delight 
intermingled.
I see the beach,
strewn with scattered shells,
slick jellyfish, driftwood, 
seaweed and smooth sea-worn rocks.
I gather treasures that appeal to me.

I watch dogs frolic, running in circles, 
children building sandcastles.
I feel myself refreshed by the blue sky,
the aquamarine water,
and the sun-dazzled, whiteness of  sand.
  
I let my thoughts wander, as I
wonder, my senses sparkle, alive.

Suzanne Delaney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 5/28/2021 8:26:00 PM
Nothing like a vacation by the seashore ~ you really bring it to life, Suzanne
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Date: 6/3/2013 2:13:00 PM
Awesome Sue, reminds me of living in Astoria Oregon ,,,, It so good to have my cp working , so I can read such good poetry ;}
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Date: 6/1/2013 6:29:00 AM
This is quite a scene you convey to the viewer Suzanne; i was quite enchanted throughout..' also thank you for the visit to my page..'
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Date: 5/30/2013 5:39:00 AM
Starting my day with your poetry Suzanne;And Seaside Stroll was wounderful. I saw myself on the boardwalk at Daytona feeling every word of your poem . Hearing , seeing , smelling and having it come to life again. Thank you.
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Date: 5/29/2013 4:53:00 PM
Lovely piece, I feel refreshed.
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Date: 5/29/2013 3:08:00 AM
- Hi Suzanne, thanks for your lovely poem - I love it. - Have a nice day, hope the sun shines on you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:36:00 PM
just love your seaside stroll so visual, so wonderfully written..
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:01:00 PM
Suzanne I know what you mean, everything about the seashore energizes all your senses. A Zen aesthetics, visible and effective. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/28/2013 10:04:00 AM
Well done on your beautiful pen. I love it. AO
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:04:00 AM
Beautifully written, SuZ. Your words make the sights and sound so very much alive... David
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