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Save-A-Lot Tennessee

One percent milk chided the butter about its worth, And the eggs got all cracked up at the stock boys’ jokes. Nutty candy bars laughed joyfully at all the mirth, But all shunned the outcast; a pack of generic smokes. Ground Chuck had just been through the grinder Yet he was glad when he encountered fresh, hot buns. Over in health and beauty, condoms became a reminder, Trash magazines spreads all; Hot and cross rolls share puns!

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Date: 1/13/2011 9:31:00 AM
You have also described the Save-A-Lot stores in New Jersey quite well in this fine entry with good rhyming.
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Date: 8/19/2010 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/16/2010 4:26:00 AM
funny
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Date: 8/16/2010 4:26:00 AM
congrats on the win!!
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Date: 8/16/2010 3:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this cute write Virginia, love Wilma
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:27:00 PM
Cute, Virginia. And congratulations.
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Date: 8/12/2010 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations Virginia on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Grocery Grammar ". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 6:26:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Virginia
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Date: 8/10/2010 5:17:00 PM
Funny poem and a winner. congratulations. Lvoe, Joyce
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Date: 8/10/2010 1:33:00 PM
Congrats Virginia on your success in my "Grocery Grammar" contest with this super write and thankxxx for supporting my contest endeavors..with luv..
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Date: 8/9/2010 11:42:00 AM
I was gone and did not read any poetry the past weekend. So I am trying to get some read today. I am pleased that yours is among what I have read today and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Virginia. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 12:04:00 AM
A nice entry to the contest, Virginia. Good luck
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Date: 8/8/2010 10:56:00 PM
nice one, good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/8/2010 10:23:00 PM
I love this poem, you did very well, best of luck in the contest ~~~
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