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Savannah In the Sunset

As the Sun went to sleep in the beautiful blue horizon, the clouds looked like as though they were glowing from within The birds created patterns in the darkening sky, as they went back to their nests Giraffes, gazelles and elephants decorated the landscape with their different shades of colors, as they returned back to their abode Trees’ barks looked as though they were burning from fire that couldn’t consume them; a natural effect of the Sun’s divine Sunset glow This is the place that I discovered the beautiful art of the Creator; an art like no other

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Date: 12/16/2013 9:10:00 AM
Thanks all for your kind applaud. I really appreciate it! ;-)
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Date: 12/13/2013 11:51:00 PM
Teddy, love the win...PD
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Date: 12/13/2013 11:41:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem, a wonderful read.
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Date: 12/13/2013 10:15:00 AM
A great poem Teddy.Wonderful.Thanks for the support.(: ) Jenish.
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Date: 12/13/2013 8:40:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem on nature, Congrats, Teddy
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