Sacred Serpent -Win

(Maya mythology or Mayan civilization describes a Sacred Serpent or Vision serpent as being the vehicles by which celestial bodies, such as the sun and stars, cross the heavens. The shedding of their skin made them a symbol of rebirth and renewal. In Yoga it is called Kundalini)


Spirited, chromatic flare, igniting Force, energy for creativity Enough sense for solution and secret Within your stomach I am the answer For ever I have been fitted within you A lambent lotus, a crest of the light I am the cause why you get awakened Within your stomach I am the answer. Am a sacred serpent lying coiled You have to stir me to for full arousal And with a speed of a sound Within your stomach I am the answer Your animating passion I will open Guiding you to the room of pure love Like a silken lotus you will be adorned Within your stomach I am the answer
+++++ Date 8-12-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Form: Free Verse The theme chosen is 5) Spiritual Fifth place win Contest : In the Faraway byGiorgio V.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/28/2014 11:21:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 1/28/2014 6:53:00 AM
A very unique one to read and I liked it so much! It's always interesting to know about the other Civilizations and mythologies..Congrats Dr Ram on your win! Regards..
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Date: 1/27/2014 11:05:00 PM
Thnx for stopping by... Congrats back, hope all is well!!
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Date: 1/27/2014 7:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, as well, Dr. Ram!
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:00:00 AM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram.
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Date: 12/14/2013 9:31:00 PM
very interesting for this contest!! the repeated line is brilliant!!
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Date: 12/8/2013 1:52:00 PM
- Maya mythology is interesting. - A well written poem, like it. - Good luck in the contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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