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My Grandpa used to dance and sing, Joy to my heart he always would bring; Just a few bars, not the whole song, Pretty soon I’d be singing along; “Rye whiskey, rye whiskey” you’d hear us both say, Or “Red River Valley”, if it was a good day; All the old westerns, when I hear them I cry, I don’t hear them often since Grandpa died; No one sings “Old Faithful” no more, It’s just an old song that people ignore; He used to say “now that was art”, I have to agree, I know them by heart; I catch myself humming an old melody, And I smile, hoping he’s thinking of me; And to prove that I know it, I burst out in song, And maybe in heaven, he’s singing along; “If the ocean was whiskey and I was a duck, I’d swim to the bottom and never come up”; My Grandpa was so special you see, And by having his songs, he lives on through me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/26/2010 11:37:00 PM
Hi Tirzah Thanks for supporting my contest but the limit is 2 lines.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/22/2010 2:19:00 AM
Great dedication, really enjoyed this.... a lot. It was the same way with my Gramps.
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Date: 6/21/2010 7:13:00 PM
awesome memories and great songs shared with loved ones are the best.
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Date: 6/21/2010 6:12:00 PM
A nice recollection of memories of your grandpa. I liked the expression...If the ocean was whiskey.....
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:36:00 PM
Songs can trigger some pleasant memories. I enjoyed your poem:)
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:36:00 PM
Hi Tirzah! great couplet!.... I have a similar story.... in the 60's, when Pop would take our family camping at State Parks in Minnesota...he would be so happy he would sing this old-time tune...."oh, that good ol' that good ol' mountain dew!.....them that refuse it are few.... if ya shut up yer mug, I'll fill up yer jug, with that good ol' mountain dew!....(repeat!) good times! fer sure! Tirzah! you too with yer Grandpa!!! jimbo
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