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Rubbish Poem, Do Not Read

Gonna improve my poetry gonna dispense with stupid rhymes I'll never again force it together instead I'll write those random lines It's suppose to be all modern avant garde sort of thing concentrating just on “feelings” keeping it concise, with well, zing! But to be perfectly honest I'm finding it hard to do You see, for me, rhyming well... its really my literary glue But I promise to do my best be conscious of bad habits analyse my lines so very closely and change them where I can

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Date: 6/4/2016 10:33:00 PM
Funny and cute poem Declan that wasn't rubbish to me!:)
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Date: 6/4/2016 8:48:00 PM
Made me smile Declan I too tend to gravitate towards writing in rhyme, although I have learned so so many new forms since I joined here:-) hugs Jan xx
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