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In the Cemetary

Pencil is bitten, tooth marks marring, but the paper is still empty. The clock shows quarter to one, I need to leave at three, what to write, what to say. He was a friend, but not close, I never really knew him, and his death came as a shock. What to say, what to say? Clock shows quarter after. Pressure is on. Quickly, think of something. Why me, why must I? Too late to pick someone else, must say the right thing to comfort the horrified family. But in shock, brain gone awry, is not the best condition, and the clock shows quarter to three. Swoop up notes, empty speech, run to the cemetery. In shock, they stand there Wearing black, with blank faces Suicide unseen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/21/2015 9:17:00 AM
Interesting choice of topic, and a unique take on it. I like how the haiku and prose relate. Thanks for entering this piece into my contest. Keep enjoying the haibun.
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Date: 8/21/2015 1:54:00 AM
Congrats on another wonderful win Glory with this amazing haibun!
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Date: 8/20/2015 6:37:00 PM
Glory, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
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Date: 8/20/2015 12:01:00 PM
Such deep and sad imagery congrats on your win:-)hugs jan xx
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