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A Rose For the Desert

I stand in the midst of swirling sand of this arid and sun-ravaged land, I hold in my hand a vibrant rose From this harsh sun I shielded it close. A solitary rose; yet how did it wilt right in my hand that I feel guilt-- Oh God, did I embrace it too close? Why was I not able to save my red rose, Petal by petal it fell apart on the ground breaking my heart asunder but nary a sound; A measly flower-- is that all you see? A whimsical notion, a foolhardy task of me! I kissed this denuded stem with my undying love, Damnation has befallen like a lightning from above And the heavens stood by as my love lay dying while I was weeping, while I was crying. Thus let me this much to you all assure-- Never will I lay my hand on a thing so pure; Yet, if all my lofty hopes dissipate erelong I stand guilty I confess, I did do wrong. I was a fool; it was but a frivolous scheme A rose to bloom in wilderness was my dream!
(Inspired by “A Dream within a Dream” by Edgar Allan Poe)
Put Your Best Poe forward contest by Tommy Boy

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Date: 10/2/2017 5:47:00 PM
An awesome write Abdul. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/2/2017 3:18:00 PM
Abdul, CONGRATULATIONS on your win !
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Date: 12/3/2015 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations Abdul.
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Date: 12/3/2015 4:16:00 AM
Brilliant write abdul.. congrats on fine win!
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Date: 12/2/2015 11:42:00 PM
Abdul, Congratulations on your Poe, Poe WIN! SKAT :)
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Date: 8/7/2015 1:29:00 AM
Very expressive poem abdul! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/6/2015 8:08:00 PM
Abdul. Congratulations on your HM -xox-SKAT
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Date: 7/11/2015 10:47:00 AM
beautifully penned Abdul good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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