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Rondelet: Rat-A-Tat-'Tat

For the Sandy Hook Newtown children and their mentors Rondelet: Rat-a-tat-'tat Rat-a-tat-'tat Rattle staccato riddle tumble Rat-a-tat-'tat Toppled children scatter rat-tat Innocent voices all tremble Rifled trillions sure-fire treble Rat-a-tat-'tat (c) T. Wignesan - Paris, 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/16/2012 12:05:00 PM
Hi Andrea! Season's Greetings from Paris! I, too, forgot to pen the dedication to the Newtown victims. Thanks very much for the cheerful comment. I accept them in the name of the sacrificed innocent lives (and of course, their protectors as well). Every good wish. Be seeing you all - through your poems - later. Wignesan
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Date: 12/16/2012 10:14:00 AM
forgot to say, it reminds me much of that popular song from last year, where the refrain says: better run , better run. sad, but a powerful. to get across the message.
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Date: 12/16/2012 10:13:00 AM
a powerful one!
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