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Rock-Paper-Scissors

ROCK-PAPER-SCISSORS • on scorching sun with scissors of red ray kids waded paper boats down winding bay huge rock slammed their course sails flat, with full force! so rock/paper/scissors bets winged a tricky play • although the rushed pace was like wrestling and left their fists flushed red and sweating, best of four rounds caused seizures playmates hid crazed wrist fissures hours after, hungry tummies stopped pretending P.D’s Rock/ Paper/ Scissors By nette onclaud

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Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/18/2011 12:04:00 PM

These have been amazingly done, brilliant work nette!! Congrats on your win dear..love to you, gautami

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 6/17/2011 1:41:00 PM

Oh nette how delightful this is.Thanks for the wonderful comment on Clint and yes but did I enter it.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Jack Horne

Date: 6/17/2011 11:31:00 AM

Many congrats on your wins in 'Scissors' and 'Sonnets', Nette : )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/17/2011 11:28:00 AM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/17/2011 7:14:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., nette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/17/2011 4:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Nette. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2011 6:05:00 PM

Thank you for entering in my contest Nette, enjoyed you entry, congrats on your win:),..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/16/2011 5:44:00 PM

Nice work, Nette. Congrats on your success in PD's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2011 5:14:00 PM

Congrats Nette luv on your HM in PD's cool contest with this cool entry ..sorry I did not get to read it before time.. apologize please.. very very busy these days..till the dust settles with this new home it will be this way ..sorry my friend.. congrats on the HM for excellence luv..

Daver Austin

Date: 6/15/2011 1:36:00 PM

Have played this game many times, but not with this amount of imagination. Good luck in contest. Love. daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/15/2011 12:50:00 PM

super entry luv.. am only on for a split second..much going on today and tonight..explain later.. just posting an entry for Rick's contest and then off again..work on your Zodiac Zone tomorrow if possible.. in process of packing and moving .. oh long story .. catch u later my friend.. good luck in PD's cool contest.. a winner for sure..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/15/2011 11:31:00 AM

We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Nette. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol

Constance La France

Date: 6/15/2011 6:30:00 AM

Wonderful take with this poem for the contest, nette, best of luck and thanks so much for my 2nd place in your Jeans contest, I am so honored~~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/15/2011 6:28:00 AM

Interesting one..Great story in poetic form..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me ..Thanks for the selection of my work as the honored second place in your contest..I know that it is not easy choosing the best of those great ones entered..Sara

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/15/2011 4:41:00 AM

So glad to find time and read 'you' once again,dear friend,lovely post!

Jodie Williams

Date: 6/15/2011 2:16:00 AM

i really like this nette, but then i always enjoy your pieces best best wishes in the contest :)

Kash Poet

Date: 6/15/2011 12:40:00 AM

Wonderful Limericks here Nette...Best wishes...come.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/14/2011 10:16:00 PM

Good luck with your limericks. A great job. Thank you for my 2nd place in your contest. My daddy would be surprised to find his old overalls among these beloved blue jeans. Love, Joyce

James Foulk

Date: 6/14/2011 8:49:00 PM

really enjoyed reading this one Nette, good luck in contest. thank you for reading and commenting on Heavens's Delight.

Mourning Mist

Date: 6/14/2011 6:36:00 PM

fissures and fours do not rhyme..just to let you know, at least up here..no idea if you have an accent redm bay and play work, course and force...wrestling and sweating do not really rhyme well either..sweating rhymes with petting, setting, getting,letting, etc..

Nette Onclaud
Date: 6/15/2011 6:56:00 AM

oh mist, how about internal rhymes? :)

Nette Onclaud
Date: 6/14/2011 6:45:00 PM

hope you've read or heard of end rhymes, dear... i stand by my work.. thanks for the concern, mist..;) huggs!