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Rock Me - the 6th Street Series - Part 3

1:50 am The crowd thins, last call is shouted, the gear is stored as the last patron leaves Glasses washed and bottles tossed, I hop down off of the stage watching her The Shiner clock now reads 2:15 am, sidewalks are quiet except for the lost ones, can't find their cars or their heads for that matter Good thing, they shouldn't be driving anyway Tight jeans, that black T, hair pulled back, she says good night to her employees, turns the key in the lock, then leans against the bar, another long night Neon lights illuminate her face and I smile "You up for some breakfast babe, or something else?" She wraps her arms around my neck and in a playful voice says, "something else" Then she kisses me and I fall in love all over again "You were great tonight," she says with a sincere grin "You were better," I answer kissing her again "So what did you have in mind boss?" I tease "You're the rock star...rock me," she teases back Another Friday night on 6th Street The club, the crowds, the music, the feeling There's something very special about this place as I take her hand...the night is young Please check out parts 1 and 2 if you get a chance The 6th Street I am talking about is in Austin Texas. It is the center of the musical world in that city. You can find any kind of music you like being played live in any of a number of different clubs on this street There are 4 parts to this series if you care to see them. Actually there are 5, but # 5 would probably be a bit much for this site.

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Date: 11/8/2019 7:49:00 PM
one can feel the love and yearning in this part....the night's still full of life....
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Date: 10/28/2016 3:27:00 PM
Lovely night ..when the night is young..all comes to life...
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Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2016 4:34:00 PM
It sure does. :) Thank you my friend. I have one more part coming in a little while
Date: 10/28/2016 2:19:00 AM
I don't ever want this series to end, 'rock me' all night long. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2016 8:12:00 AM
All things must end my friend. Thanks so very much for your kind words.
Date: 10/27/2016 10:28:00 PM
Hey Chris, when you get to #5 can you soupmail it to me please? I promise I'll delete it after reading! Haha. Very talented mate!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2016 8:12:00 AM
Maybe I will do just that. Thanks so much for reading and commenting Rick
Date: 10/27/2016 5:57:00 PM
you've got it. artistry. embrace it. it'll take you places. I feel your energy. electricity. go for it. fly free. no chains. to hold you back. spank heaven. and she'll crack. at your smack. don't hold emotions slack. run with the pack. I have a piece being published soon. and I feel your talent gunning for noon.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/27/2016 6:02:00 PM
Thanks so much Holly. Please try to read parts 1 and 2 if you get a chance. I will be posting a part 4 sometime tomorrow. I appreciate your kind thoughts and encouraging words and congratulations on being published. That is so awesome. Definitely something to be proud of. Rock on Holly.
Date: 10/27/2016 5:30:00 PM
Hi Chris, I'm loving your series. Because they are filled with two things that I really love, romance and music. I could just imagine the character in your story up on stage rockin it out. Well done. I can't wait for the next installment: -) Alexis PS. You are an excellent story teller.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/27/2016 5:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Alexis, I am glad you are enjoying this. Part 4 I will post tomorrow sometime.
Date: 10/27/2016 5:14:00 PM
I think I might fly on down to Austin when the snow hits here.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/27/2016 5:21:00 PM
Thanks Tim, you should...no snow in Austin.

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