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River

Oh river's surging pulse you are an art of nature's outburst, How you show God's wisdom reflected in your flowing freedom You are relentlessly streaming while beings within you are thriving You are worth the praise more than any man-made sacraments for your flow is nourishing and your rhythm is far more revitalizing than the sermon's sting The moon above your wife is teased by your sensual murmurs at night And intoxicated by like the sight of streaming liquors- spitting ecstatic moans every time you made love with her inside the wilderness of the forest in the stillness of the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/15/2010 7:20:00 PM
enjoyed reading today!!
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Date: 8/11/2010 12:26:00 PM
Creative perspective for an interesting view. Nice use of personification. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen
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Date: 7/29/2010 7:15:00 AM
This is extremely beautiful,I love the way the river makes love to the moon,passionate indeed Juan!Celene!
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Date: 7/27/2010 9:49:00 PM
Very enjoyable poem. Speaks of the innocence of nature and I get a sense of provision from reading this, that somehow one does not need more than a certain connection to rivers, nights, moons.
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Date: 7/27/2010 7:36:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your newest poem today Juan. I want to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2010 4:05:00 AM
Very senual and passionate write..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 7/26/2010 7:30:00 PM
Lovely imagery with this poem about the river. I did one like this too! Very nice, Jaun! Luv,Andrea
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Date: 7/25/2010 8:38:00 AM
Very nice imagery, Juan! Enjoyed reading it today afternoon! And thank you for your kind comments!...Gert
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Date: 7/24/2010 10:08:00 PM
Nice expressions on ... The moon above you wife....
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Date: 7/24/2010 9:38:00 PM
nice one, enjoyed
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Date: 7/24/2010 8:44:00 PM
NICE WRITE, ENJOYED THE READ -SKAT
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