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Rising Sun

The scene appears before me with a light From the sun a great mighty ball of fire The morning light sparkles losing the night There’s love from the sun, the moon to retire From the top of a hill this is a sight The clouds all have formations I desire Spectacular feelings is what I share When the sun rises up from over there
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/5/2013 3:47:00 PM
You have created a masterpiece painting with words!
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Date: 5/5/2013 2:53:00 PM
awesome write, my friend. Sorry I missed your contest - trouble with my computer and my ex,,,
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Date: 5/5/2013 11:56:00 AM
SOUP MAIL.. URGENT
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Date: 5/5/2013 11:22:00 AM
Absolutely loved Donna's response to your beautiful poem my good fiend! I second, third and forth the motion! Cheers!
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Date: 5/5/2013 6:46:00 AM
Russell...this is one of my favorites from you...very alive!!!! Sounds as though you are standing atop a mountain close to the clouds reaching for sunrise...feeling the warmth....awesome...
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Date: 5/5/2013 6:36:00 AM
Good morning, Russell -A beautiful morning it has been so far. Thanks for sharing the lovely scene before your eyes. The spectacular feeling goes a long way my poet friend. The sun rising over there looks as lovely as the sun rising here in my back year. The picture and imagery is perfect ~Always *LINDA
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Date: 5/5/2013 6:19:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your visits..Your comments are much appreciated..Soup Mail Soon..Sara
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