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Ripe For Young Love

Clinging lips to lips, blushing hearts were ripe for love… A peach of a day! ~ Intoxicated with clusters of emotion….. Love grows on the vines ~ Lemon-drop morning…. She puckers up eagerly for bittersweet kiss .............................................. For the "A Kiss Like Fruit" Contest: Sponsored by Michael Falotico By Carrie Richards

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/7/2011 6:16:00 AM
A belated congratulations I am sending you for your win in Michael's "A Kiss Like Fruit" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2011 6:48:00 AM
Beautiful series of senryu here Carrie.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/4/2011 8:20:00 PM
I love them, Carrie, particularly the first one! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/4/2011 2:55:00 PM
Tasty write that sparks many tastes... Congrats Carrie.... love Michael
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Date: 10/21/2011 4:52:00 PM
"clusters of emotion".. oh YEAH! Nice one, Carrie, write on and on! Namaste~N
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