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Richard, I See Your Soul

Richard Lamoureux, I have you figured out, because I read some of your poems back to 2012, thirteen pages of penned beauty and soulful writes. Your first posted poem translucent with snow, and others like Tears of an unknown boy, where men can cry and your faith shines, and your Broken Glass poem drips with forgotten love. It was you who brought us the QuesionKu! Oh, Melted Tears of days gone by, sadness and love. Healed Wing's line, born to fly on wings of strength. You hide bits of yourself on bottom shelves, you see beyond words, you see all the lovely bones, shattering roses, all tomorrows and todays, all the cups empty, all the broken souls and you have soul, oh yes, you do. And whether you are writing in Rhyme, Cinquain, Acrostic, Free Verse, Sonnet, Haiku, Couplet, or even Pantoum, you take us on a journey, we just slip into your words, and we are transported, and see within your poetic soul. And you are not afraid to pen in, I Don't Know, and take the Villanelle and Terzanelle on, But one thing is certain you are a beautiful soul to behold. ______________________ October 15, 2016 Verse For the contest, See, if you have me figured out, sponsor, Richard Lamoureux Fifth Place

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Date: 11/17/2016 6:26:00 AM
Congrats, Constance!
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Date: 11/12/2016 10:55:00 AM
Great write! Congratulations Broken Wings :-)
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Date: 11/12/2016 2:53:00 AM
Congrats BW, for your placement with this wonderful piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 11/11/2016 12:02:00 PM
Hi BW, This is a beautiful tribute piece. Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/10/2016 3:38:00 PM
So very nice! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/10/2016 10:29:00 AM
I really enjoyed this thoughtful write. I also like your presentation. Hugs and congratulations Constance.
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Date: 10/28/2016 11:23:00 AM
I think this is lovely! Good luck.
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Date: 10/15/2016 9:20:00 PM
I think you nailed who he is and did it superbly Constance! 7 ; )
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Date: 10/15/2016 7:06:00 PM
what a wonderful tribute to Richard:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/15/2016 5:34:00 PM
This is a lovely tribute to Richard, Broken Wings. He is all that you have so aptly written here! :) I particularly like his Terzanelle writes. :) Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/15/2016 5:31:00 PM
That is so nice!
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