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Rhiannon, Celtic Goddess of the Moon

Rhiannon, Celtic Goddess of the Moon, with your silver hair That flows for eternity as on your beautiful silver steed speed Across the huge sky; you use your beauty__ men to snare How you've lured men for centures and their minds ensnare Rhiannon, Celtic Goddess of the Moon with flowing silver hair Without a care on your beautiful silver steed ride on into eternity Drawing all men, trap__luring to come and gaze with ease Looking into the night sky they see your beauty as you ride by Seemingly on your silver steed you rear up and stars Flow into your trance and around your body they follow Captivited by your beauty and magical pull into moon glow How you have lured men for centures and them ensnared Rhiannon, Celtic Goddess of the Moon, with your silver hair That flows for eternity as on your beautiful silver steed speed

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James Fraser

Date: 7/7/2010 2:03:00 PM

Terrific capture of Rhiannon Sara, exceptional in fact. It's also a lovely name, and a beautiful song by Stevie Nicks >> James

John Freeman

Date: 7/7/2010 1:26:00 PM

A nice personification of Rhiannon. Sara. Way to go lady. Agape, Moses

Adell Foster

Date: 7/7/2010 12:23:00 PM

Sara, this is an awesome read, your well chosen words have brought the imagery to life for the readers, excellent figurative language throughtout. Best Wishes in the Contest ;-) God's Love, ALways, Adell

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2010 4:11:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Sara. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/7/2010 1:49:00 AM

Hi Sara, very impressive personification, what a lovely picture of the Celtic Goddess of the Moon!!! Enjoyed reading it this morning. Yes, they believed that Exypéry was shot down during WW II by a German fighter plane, but also engine trouble could have caused his death...Thank you for yor kind comment on Night Flight and have a nice day...Gert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2010 6:56:00 PM

Hey, not THAT'S personification, Sara!! I can picture her in the sky, with one of those constellations like they describe in books with stars forming around her beautiful form. Luv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/6/2010 6:15:00 PM

This is certainly a powerful entry for Dr. Ram's contest.. good luck in the contest.. now please. ... do this.. drink plenty of water.. force yourself if u have to but get it down.. AND.. cranberry juice .. straight.. not mixed with apples or grape just plain cranberry juice.. it does wonders for the kidneys.. clears infections as well as prevents them too.. and liquids are super important .. just as prayers.. so for every glass of water or juice u drink a prayer will be sent to God to bless u.

Rick Parise

Date: 7/6/2010 5:53:00 PM

Hi Sara , Very nice really enjoyed~Blessing to you!!~Rick

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 7/6/2010 5:46:00 PM

She is beautiful, no doubt. Vince

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/6/2010 3:27:00 PM

You have a winner here I am sure. Great work. Thank you fro your comments. Love, Joyce

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/6/2010 1:38:00 PM

Really enjoyed your informative piece tonight Sara, tc Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/6/2010 1:19:00 PM

Perhaps this Rhiannon was the inspiration for the song by the same title by Fleetwood Mac. Enjoy learning about history and cultural legends. Good work, Sara! Love, Carolyn