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Restless Night - a Backwards Poem

For last night was a restless night, Just lost so much needed sleep, I promise I wasn't being lazy, I thought I would quickly wake up, Downed so much coffee it was crazy, Then the moon and light came together , Not refreshed from the exhausting night before, I was alone, scared and tired, Always wanting the opposite in my life, On how I could sleep so much better I couldn't make up my mind, I had a hard decision to make. What should I do during this rough time? With a little backwards prose, You'll find that makes sense also, Make sure you read real close, If you really want to follow -Laura Urbaniak 10-10-2015

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Date: 10/12/2015 8:45:00 AM
I've been up for three days writing and drinking coffee, I get you. Sometimes our greatest pleasure can be our bully as well. Great flow, I love it!
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Date: 10/12/2015 10:09:00 AM
I hear ya! Welcome to our lives, right?!? Thanks for the kind words :) -LU
Date: 10/11/2015 11:50:00 AM
Hi Laura, thank you for the reply to my comment. LINDA
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Date: 10/11/2015 7:07:00 PM
Thank you for your comment! Be blessed :) -Laura
Date: 10/10/2015 10:39:00 PM
WOW, Laura, this is brilliantly clever and creative. It's not easy to decide on, however, you will find space. Always a pleasure. LINDA
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Date: 10/11/2015 11:47:00 AM
Thank you Linda :):):) be blessed

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