Restless

restless dreaming sleep poetic lines in full view.. waking dreams~vanish

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2013 11:51:00 PM

this is really cool, Sara. I LIKES!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2013 1:41:00 PM

wow, I know how it is to dream so vividly, then wake up to a faded thought.... lovely poem.... posted a new poem "Atlantis." hope you have time to enjoy the poem... always ~ LINDA

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/12/2013 10:18:00 AM

Even if the poetic lines to remember you could, better this poem to be, Impossible! Excellent!

The Situation

Date: 11/11/2013 4:14:00 PM

sometimes all i can remember is that i had a great line. and said it several times and try to remember it but it's gone. i have never recalled those lines. but that is why when they come i write them down.

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/11/2013 1:58:00 PM

Coleridge wrote "Xanadu" upon waking from a dream. I hope you start to remember the lines which come forth in your dreams! Nice haiku! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/11/2013 6:32:00 AM

I know exactly what you mean by this write, and I agree, those wonderful thoughts that create a perfect poem from a dream seem to vanish with the dream just as fast! It is so frustrating whenever that happens too, you have the greatest poem of that dream, and boom that dream disappears and so does your poem! This is such a tremendous write my friend! I totally loved reading this lovely poem this morning! What a supreme piece, Great Work!!