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Response of A Harried Housewife To Her Spouse

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Response of A Harried Housewife To Her Spouse

“The children are always interrupting. You never have time for me,” her husband whined as he dropped his dirty clothes right there on the floor by the bed. Trying not to roll her eyes, she gave this quick response to her disgruntled spouse: “The kids, chores and mishaps have me spinning, and you tell me you feel rejected. To have a blissful home takes two. Consideration is key. I’m also missing you! To be successful in our bed, take time OUT of it. . . for ME!” A Double Etheree written May 27, 2012 for David Williams' The Three H's Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 9:41:00 PM
    Wow, you are quite proficient in so many forms of poetry. And you write beautifully. Well done!

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 11:14:00 AM
    Well said Andrea!

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 8:54:00 AM
    Smoooth as silk, and so grammatical, which is hard with these restrictive forms. Congratulations on your WIN!!! Hugs, Keith :)

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 12:10:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in David's "Hero's & Heroine's" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 4:01:00 AM
    cONGRATS Andrea. its my fav poem to win!

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 1:24:00 AM
    Andrea I love the Ehteree form, and this poem speaks volumes of a lot of women who feel neglect, a sad tale...David

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 12:57:00 AM
    ooh well done with this very nice, congratulations once again Andy xx

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 8:38:00 PM
    coolio, andie.. special cheers to you for this super win!:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 7:09:00 PM
    Ah yes..marriage? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:40:00 AM
    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 1:24:00 PM
    Yes two working can serve each other better, that in turn brings self-value to the apex Andrea; hope this does great!! in the contest:

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 2:17:00 PM
    I love, love, love this one. Sounds exactly like my hubby. had me chuckling with this one. Exceptional. love phyl

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 1:36:00 PM
    are you giving him a time-out? lol - consideration is definitely needed here - hope this isn't typical of your marriage! good luck :)

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 6/2/2012 2:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    The kids have long flown the nest, so this is not really about me anymore! Maybe once upon a time. haha
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 5:48:00 AM
    I like this one..It also looks like the housewife who has put all a little in the middle from all the stress of her life..Designed like a winner..Thanks for stopping by my blog and my work..Your presence is always uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 3:40:00 AM
    Oh, I can already see this at the top of the winner's list Andrea. I loved it!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 9:08:00 PM
    I can just envision this scene, Andrea...kids camped outside the bedroom door too...hahah..This was a wonderful form to contrast both viewpoints. Powerful vehicle and a winning write!...Oh BTW, I am not writing a lot lately...under the weather a bit...I was merely telling u that if I EVER Won a spot in that person's contest it would be a miracle from the Lord..hahah..Classical poetry and me don't mix very well...Off to read another...Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 1:55:00 PM
    lol, that was telling him! A sure winner here, my friend

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:48:00 AM
    A new form of invention, loved and enjoyed it. Best of luck in the contest.,Always bl

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 8:18:00 AM
    hey we go again, such imagery you show here, Andrea, you sure are the 'bees knees' when it comes to poetry, up there with the absolute best. harry

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 6:17:00 AM
    I like the form you chose here Andrea.. well done..Love...Joseph

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