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Remembering When

I remember when: on an August day, while on a Caribbean cruise My echo rippling across the sea as I vowed Forever; "I Do" Take thee LENORE for the Eons of Eternity, my ever Loving WIFE Entwined as One, Forevermore: the Banns of me and YOU I remember when; I impatiently Lifted the Pure White transparent Vail I remember when; we sealed our Vows,as our fevered hot lips met I remember when; we danced our first dance as Husband and WIFE Our Hearts beat together as one, with a LOVE I would never forget I remember when; Dad gave us his blessing with a sweet LOVING Toast I remember, the sparkle in your Emerald eyes, as we shared our wedding cake The sensuous wink, the body language, the silent whisper of LOVE Soon in ecstasy, together as One, two LOVING bodies shall quake -------------------------------------- I remember when; "Dad" said "Lenore is my first born, my baby girl" "I have given her to YOU this day to have and to hold, ALWAYS and FOREVER" "She now is YOUR Eternal Wife, the fullfillment of the void in YOUR Life" "LOVE her with all YOUR Heart, for the Eons of Eternity, ALWAYS and FOREVER" I remember when the setting sun, touched its reflection on the Caribbean Sea I remember seeing Lenore's silohette, in the halos of the double sun I remember thinking, soon we will retreat to the tranquility of our Bridal Suite As we finally get to know each other as we entwine together as One I remember when with a thundering roar, the Flagpole's mooring snapped I remember the boom sweeping across the deck: knocking Lenore over the railing Surely this was a dream, a daytime, nightmare : a moment I could never forget Until my Eternity, the agony, pain, and sorrow, of this Broken Heart,Forever wailing Inspired by the contest "Remembering When" Sponsored by Debra Squyres In Memory of my Beloved Wife "Lenore Ellen (Adams) Johnson"

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Date: 9/17/2013 5:41:00 PM
My poetic friend; your thrust into love itself has moved this soul ! Quiver<-- this word truly has made its mark when I read your thundering heart slap 'pon thine slip dear poet..........may your wait sir; not be in vain; may your beauty have wings fluttering about you when eternity engulf you and your love ! *smiles* Have a blessed week my friend....much love, james
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Date: 6/26/2013 10:58:00 AM
This is beautiful and shows the love you have in your heart. It brings tears and sadness. A masterpiece of tribute. love phyl
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Date: 6/14/2013 5:18:00 PM
Ow my..the more i get to know of what happened on that day..the more I can t accept it.Some things we can only accept due to our faith and peace we can only conquer knowing she is still with us through soul ..awaiting in a better place.
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Date: 6/14/2013 5:18:00 PM
Going to my favourites
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Date: 6/15/2013 1:22:00 AM
My Dear Princess, I'm not sure I have accepted this either. I can not wait until I enter Eternity and all my writes and POEMS are forgotton Memories, I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER...Papa
Date: 6/12/2013 8:35:00 PM
So happy to know you can manage just this much. You are in my thoughts and prayers. Your Spirit nurse and poetess. SuZ
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Date: 6/12/2013 3:58:00 PM
Hello Harry....so good to know you are better...this lovely poem touched my heart...always...Donna...
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Date: 6/12/2013 2:40:00 PM
I AM SO HAPPY YOU DONT EVEN KNOW.It made my day knowing you are stong enough and feeling good enough to write.And a fantastic one as always.Loves,hugs and prayers,Colleen.P.S tell flipper hello
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Date: 6/12/2013 12:25:00 PM
I enjoyed
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