Remains

Revenge sweet turning with hate a brother rises striking blows landing hits brother in wicked deeds evilness within mans own soul Cruelty crawling inside desires suffering greed of nations they plea Rise up against nations man at war tearing asunder God's creation People slowly murdering loveless Pride a sinful act of violence laced with pain destroying pure love everything that once stood out housed peace so fine cut beautiful, good sharing caring free, in this one, big show rolls Keeps turning, the wheel of hope whom will speak, as we all become part of his heavenly dust in the end or burning remains of hell's fire

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/16/2014 11:48:00 AM

- A deep and powerful poem, Liam - very well written - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/16/2014 12:07:00 PM

thank you anne lise for the truly wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated have a blessed beautiful sunday dear pal

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/16/2014 8:11:00 AM

strong pen mate a change to your normal writes Liam I like it hugs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/16/2014 9:33:00 AM

ah linda sure you know me pal wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated wishing you a blessed sunday

Kp Nunez

Date: 11/16/2014 2:43:00 AM

We always have a choice, to listen to His voice, or go on our on way, we know the end anyway. A superb piece on fire, you have there, sire. Kim Patrice :) Rated!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/16/2014 8:44:00 AM

love is the only choice that candle burns forever suffers for the sake of peace always love i see falls victim to hate wonderful comment kim thank you kindly heartfelt appreciated bless you

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/15/2014 11:14:00 PM

Powerful poem you've penned here my dear friend Liam. Permanent peace shall be achieved only one day thru Jesus Christ. Man doesn't have enough love and God in their hearts. Keep your pen golden! A 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/16/2014 8:39:00 AM

thank you dorian very kind of you some do not have as much love as others such human frailties of deep emotions wonderful comment dear friend got me thinking bless you

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/15/2014 8:18:00 PM

Liam Me Irish Mate!! Very well-penned here indeed. I think you will convince the Leprechaun Court of Judges with the high quality, well-articulated write. Going Heavenward is the best option!! Irish Mountain Dew Smiling Always, Gary

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/16/2014 8:31:00 AM

well to be honest gary smiling i am the leprechaun king ripping someone stole my pot of gold lol heaven all the way for me ha ha sniffing the old smoke from the auld turf fire hard to beat pure fresh clean living country air thank you kindly for the amazing beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated pal