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Releasing Void

Empty Lost Vacant in a light-year moment This poem is void Along with our self-esteem This yielding emotion needs shine Will we ever rise with you in merry delight? You're not here with us, so I'm hopeless we'll ever do fine Our hopes shattered and now I have stars without light Frightful Confused Startled by your Senseless removal It has been written in approval These words doesn't exist in your heart For our feelings are merely a piece of junk Do you hear our disjunked plea or are you too focused on your greed? You left us broken and envied-- you dried up our family seed! We've been trying to nourish our family... but it only drowned us in distressed emotion But I'll still try to remain true to my devotion Frenzied Jumbled Bewildered by your action of Mindless removal That has been written by your approval Are you willing to listen Or are you going to turn down our voices? You're always available to come home to apoligize-- we'll heed to your plea Do you wish to have a void Seperating our once jubilent family? It's very unclear in your pointless decision; the thought of it is too hard to avoid Disoriented Doomed Disenchanted by your action of Heartless removal That has been agreed by your approval Please put a restraining order to the void that shaped Nonsensical lines Please help me with my unstable life, for I haven't escaped From these appalling signs Even if you turn down our dissaproval, we'll remain Faithful Complete Strengthened Are your stars burning with hope?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/2/2011 2:00:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today David. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2011 6:02:00 AM
This poem is simply, pure, I love it... its deep
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