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Relatively Irrelevant

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Relatively Irrelevant

Frail and pale, oh! Can't you tell
That I have suffered a botched romance?
With open Heart, invited Hell
Though I assumed a fighting stance

But thus I learned, though I was burned,
(Always I succumb to fascination)
Perspectives glib, my Mind- a sieve! 
I mistook Love for Infatuation

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  1. Date: 12/20/2013 4:56:00 PM
    Chan The Man This is cute and clever. You created a silly and humorous write for the reader to enjoy about love and romance. Great job Thanks for the funny and crazy comment on my Mystery Man poem. If your Santa, do I get a present. Was I a good enough girl. LOL Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

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    Date: 12/21/2013 8:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the read and reply, Sweet Pea <3
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 8:02:00 PM
    Hahaha. The story of my life. I love your wit and rhyming skills. If you feel kind of lost, I've whisked you off to my "fave poets" list. Licia :-)

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    Date: 9/15/2013 9:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's just incredibly sweet and kind of you to say, Licia, and it warms my humbled heart to no end. You have officially made my morning as I am smiling from ear to ear. Thank you; I'm glad you enjoyed this piece :)