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Red Sun

**Sun Tan** Forceful ray printing dark skin Sunbathe, aquarium sky Peaceful trace beautiful line Sun comes alive --- **Hourglass Horizon** We sit embracing sweet time Beautiful amber lit eyes Red dawn mist, loving moment Holding mommy's hand --- 7-5-13

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/24/2014 8:22:00 AM

I came in search of a new poem, your getting slower at posting than I am. Then I found this 'ere gem. Love that first image of sun printing... What a wonderful way with words you have.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2014 7:58:00 AM

PD. I could have sworn it was EG that wrote that poem for you. But I went to her stuff and do not see a poem that looks like it could be the one I saw. Either she took it down or I got the author wrong! I was sure it was a newer poem and I just checked her new ones. It could have been someone else and maybe she commented on it and I confused her name with the real author because she made a comment?? I will see if I can find my own comment in an outbox but probably it scrolled off by now!!!

James Fraser

Date: 6/9/2014 2:21:00 PM

Sweet delightful poetry Linda, a joy to read this Monday evening, James....

Paul Callus

Date: 5/6/2014 2:12:00 PM

Both writes are beautiful Linda. One advantage of short poems is that I can read them over and over again...enjoy them and squeeze every drop out of them. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2014 11:29:00 AM

PD. just revisiting these. I do love sunny poems.

Romella Kitchens

Date: 3/17/2014 11:34:00 PM

Linda, your word choices and description are both very unique. Those two factors make your work interesting to read.

Saanvi Dua

Date: 12/11/2013 11:05:00 AM

Beautiful , and I just imagined all of it , and felt how wonderful and peaceful it would be ! Thanks for your inspiring comments on my poems ! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us ! Love <3 , Saanvi .....: ))

Len Gasun

Date: 11/4/2013 9:28:00 AM

Good evening my dearest sis! Are you @ work now? Thank u so much for your lovely messages in my poem "Seventh" . So sorry if I just replied now. Was @ school & I arrived late this evening. Thanks for appreciating my new avatar/pix;)) taken @Jordan. By the way, our time is still the same here. Now is 10.30 pm . It's a morning there, right? Good morning & big hugs! I also came & peeked at my latest contest w/c hopefully to be judged this wkend. Goodnyt now! Thanks 4 evrything! Tcare! lovem4evrLeo

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/16/2013 1:44:00 PM

Read this again...BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL, PD! :) BTW...honey, please go back to my poem and read my responses to your comments....LOVE ME! :) Hugs!

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/11/2013 7:26:00 AM

You do very well at these. and "aquarium sky" that's awesome. Bravo!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/25/2013 4:14:00 PM

a very beautiful piece of writing I wrote one myself next year four back to back red moon check it out with two eclipses in the sky I called it coming signs its very interesting I happened to find it by sheer luck thought I would write something about it before the actual event a piece of history

Saanvi Dua

Date: 8/21/2013 3:41:00 AM

WoW Linda ..............I wish I was a writer like you !! Stunning and beautiful work !! .........xoxo~Saanvi :)))

Rachel W

Date: 8/20/2013 8:24:00 AM

"We sit embracing sweet time" --I LOVE this line.

S. Nadia Azam Shah Bukhari

Date: 8/19/2013 1:17:00 PM

Congrats-- Very beautifully expressed. Brilliant attempt.

Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/8/2013 3:01:00 AM

Excellent love this one, great writer love the line sunbathe aquarium sky, beautifully worded, have a blessed day, hugs sueellen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2013 3:20:00 PM

Hi, PD. I bet this won in the contest so I am here to say a big congrats. I see someone congratulated you. Awesome!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/3/2013 6:56:00 PM

Hi, my evrdearest sis! Sending you my big sweet hugs, smiles w/kisses! It's nice waking up earlier this Sun. a.m. reading once again 1 of the phenomenal writes of my loveliest & #1 fav. & greatest poet. So love the glow of the sun which lit your lovely moments.. embracing it tight. I'm sorry I’ve missed to see the winners list ahead of time. Nevertheless, I'm sending my WARMEST HEARTY b-lated CONGRATS on your super win! Thank you so much for your reply & lovely comments on my poem, the chance to join the next contest as well ;) It’s esp. a great relief to hear from you. Hoping you’ll get better soon my dearest sis. Keep sending you all my loving thoughts, prayers & lovely hugs ok. I'm always w/ u. Yes, I wish you'll be w/ me one time in my vac., how about visiting me here & my turn next time there?:)). Take care always! Have a blessed wkend to you & ur family. Lovem4evr,Leo

Colleen Bono

Date: 7/30/2013 12:13:00 PM

Sending prayers and comfort to you and family. Are you doing ok? If you need to talk you know how to get a hold of me. Thinking of you and your sister. Stay strong like I know you are. Love Colleen

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 7/30/2013 8:03:00 AM

I liked this one Linda and may I say that your poem add sunshine to my day.

Skat A

Date: 7/25/2013 2:32:00 PM

..... .... congrats *****SKAT

Donna Jones

Date: 7/24/2013 7:50:00 PM

I really love embracing sweet time...among the whole.....awesome Linda...congratulations

Donna Jones
Date: 7/24/2013 7:55:00 PM

Sorry it took so long to comment...been cutting up two downed trees all day from yet more horrible storms here last night....I live between okc and Tulsa...we had between 70-80 mile winds...said I don't have enough to do already...haha...take care...glad you are OK from your wreck....thank God!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/23/2013 6:08:00 PM

Really enjoyed the sweet imagery in the second stanza. Your poem is vibrant. Congratulations on your win :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/23/2013 12:33:00 PM

Congrats on your win, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Dinda Minardi

Date: 7/23/2013 9:33:00 AM

A very good poetry, P.D. I love how you connect the sun with your memories (or i think it is -holding mommy's hand).

Taiwo Lasisi

Date: 7/17/2013 4:33:00 PM

Though I am new here but seeing your writing,I feel like you are a messiah sent to save with poetry..You have seduced my heart with such becoming natural erotic scenes