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Red Sun

Patriots' Heaven the red sun glows through white streaks of clouds on a blue canvas - a happy fourth of July written on dawn’s sky Written 6/25/13 for Russell Sivey's Red sun poetry contest

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  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:17:00 AM
    What a lovely palette of colors and soft feelings you've created here, Andrea :)

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 8:02:00 AM
    I came here to see what went wrong with this poem.Beautiful Dodoitsu!

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 8:44:00 PM
    Nice one on the red sun. I looked at the contest but nothing was coming to my mind at the phyl

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 6:47:00 AM
    Patriotic "optima forma" dodoitsu

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 5:36:00 AM
    nicely done my lady. Good luck in the contest. AO

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:01:00 PM
    Really liked the emotive scene/words here Andrea; I wish you a very happy 4th of july i suppose I will just be doing boring stuff; well apart from reading on 'soup' take care Joe..)

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 2:55:00 PM
    love this, my friend - a sure winner herre

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 7:09:00 AM
    Hey, Perfect thinking to make the holiday the theme!

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:49:00 PM
    nice timing....of course, you are always on key...thanks for the at the library, so just a short hello...all is ok

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 5:31:00 PM
    Oh this is awesome Andrea.....

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 9:23:00 AM
    How imaginative and patriotic! Just in time for the Fourth of July.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:11:00 AM
    Gorgeous, and so fitting for this time of year! Canada Day is July 1st, so we have a patriotic long weekend starting tonight :)

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:05:00 AM
    He will like this Andie. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 4:13:00 AM
    Nice going, darlin'. I think you penned a winner.... Love ya.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 12:17:00 AM
    lovely Andrea, so visual

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 11:00:00 PM
    This is clever utilizing red whie and blue. Should strike a chord with the judge. Well done Andrea!

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 7:13:00 PM
    Andrea your poem evokes mood of celebration. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 6:49:00 PM
    I can almost touch that flag fluttering away there, which reminds me, I'm off to England soon for a short while, I'd best scedadle, I don't need any more scrapes in those reinactments lol. I'll be gone before the 4th but I'll be thinking of y'all. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 6:14:00 PM
    What is "dawn’s sky"? the fire works, the mind? please tell what you are thinking, it has many meanings.

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 1:48:00 PM
    Love the idea you used for your entry Andrea, almost celebration time for you with the 4th of July being around the corner ;) all the best for the contest. Love Wilma