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Red Marks Door

Posture riddled little girl soul of soot and mind of curl, standing there alone on brink entrance, exit in a blink. There she stands steal in hands, thoughts undress, cool blades press, time holds still, gushes spill, red marks door her warm pour, entrance, exit in a blink no time left for her to think. (rhyme, something i rarely write...i love my metaphors in free style and it has always been my first choice, but i like to try other forms)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/15/2013 7:48:00 AM
Loved this, especially the first stanza. Great write; kudos! :)
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Date: 10/31/2012 12:27:00 PM
Desperation haunts the soul when emptiness fills the hole. Tools of the trade can leave their mark. When vision's filled with sky's so dark. She has a friend deep down inside. Where love so true will never hide.
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