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'red Lips - No Action'

a piece of paper covered with red lips promising a night of moving hips like a passionate pledge it drove him close to the edge a pity they couldn’t undo the zips
Contest: Valentine's Day Limerick 6th Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/18/2011 5:09:00 PM
this one is so funny Wilma. Loved it Great limerick
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Date: 1/27/2011 2:28:00 PM
Many congrats Wilma on your fine win in Francine's contest with this GEM....:)
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Date: 1/27/2011 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your win in Francine's contest "Valentine's Day Limerick". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2011 5:54:00 PM
Brought a smile to my face! Steve
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Date: 1/26/2011 4:10:00 PM
AWESOME! Wilma, Congrat's on your big win, Lainie
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Date: 1/26/2011 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/26/2011 1:46:00 AM
Nice write. Congratulations on winning with it.
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Date: 1/25/2011 10:27:00 PM
Copngratulaitons on your win, Wilma. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/25/2011 9:56:00 PM
Glad to see this one on the winners' list. A big congratulations to you, WIlma, you limerick writing fool. hahaha. LUv, Andrea ps and I love how you made yours naughty.
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:37:00 PM
Congrats Wilma on your super special win in the Valentine Day contest .. we knew these red lips would fascinate luv... enjoy another sweet success my friend..with luv..
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:34:00 PM
Tons of congrats for this great win.
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:19:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Wilma
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Date: 1/25/2011 6:18:00 PM
congrats Wilma on your sixth place win in my Valentines day contest
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Date: 1/23/2011 5:43:00 PM
Oh, hmm... it's always something!! Very clever limerick! Hugs, kris~
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Date: 1/23/2011 2:44:00 PM
he he he! wow what a gripping smile.. i think its funny.. almost happended to me.. my oppsy when things could not get unzipped... was silly like this... thanks for the laugh...take care,..p.d.
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Date: 1/23/2011 9:56:00 AM
Scissors!! Scissors!! I told you, you should always have a pair of scissors on hand, Missy :p-- you never listen to me! I actually bought 3 pairs yesterday- reckon I send one to you now?? hahaha this is such a funny limerick, Wilma :) hope your Sunday treated you good or is it the other way around? hugs to you! PS. Scissors!! :D
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Date: 1/22/2011 8:56:00 PM
LOL! Terrific one, Wilma!! Poor guy..frustrated! Good one! Hope you're having fun! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/22/2011 5:02:00 PM
Awesome , Original, Unique Wilma.. great rhyme in these lines and a fun twist at the end.. if for the contest good luck my friend.. still smiling naughtily..haha..
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Date: 1/22/2011 2:46:00 PM
Hey, what ?? hahaha. Funny one, WIlma!
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Date: 1/22/2011 2:31:00 PM
First two lines made me smile and but the last made me roar with laughter, Wilma
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Date: 1/22/2011 12:37:00 PM
Cute..Got a chuckle out of this one...Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in the contest..Sara
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Date: 1/22/2011 12:30:00 PM
Ooo I can just imagine the frustration, made me chuckle Wilma. Some have even charmed them of, hehe....:)
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Date: 1/22/2011 12:15:00 PM
Alas, the days of buttons are practically gone. They could've ripped the buttons. A scorcher, Wilma. Love, Dave
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Date: 1/22/2011 11:20:00 AM
Ha-Ha!! He had all those expectations and then couldn't "undo the zips." Very funny limerick, Wilma! You made me laugh. Thanks. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/22/2011 9:39:00 AM
extremely witty and well writtten ...well done...Syd
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