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Recalling My Dad

My father and I in a long time past played cards at the table and he would pause to tell me a tale when he was young as he did so many times before but the stories would change as he would rearrange his life as a youth in the land of his birth from Calabria to the Great White Way as a merchant marine he sailed under the sun and a rugged sargeant in World War One wounded and gassed in a battle in France medals of war and memories of grief the war soon ended to give some relief determined to find his place in the sun Then he met Joe in a factory who liked him a lot he met Jenny, his sister The belle of Salerno his favorite spot he pledged his vows and they were wed together they bonded to share the bread of life and its trials what the world had to give they raised six kids and a nice place to live the kids grew up and were not there to stay they raised kids of their own but not far away they would come on Sundays for the traditional feast of pasta and wine and delicious meats But soon time passed and Mom got sick we would all stay with Pop as we all took turns Mom got better now Pop was ill he started to take the solace of pills he needed help getting washed and I’ll never forget what he always said when I bathed him as if on cue when you get old, son, I’ll bathe you he would still reminisce about the past but he died one day there was so much to know his life became a mystery because I never asked when I was young when my father and I played cards at the table in a long time past Contest

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Date: 1/13/2016 1:01:00 AM
Ralph, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~
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Date: 1/10/2016 4:45:00 PM
Hi Richard: Thank you for sharing my story
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Date: 1/10/2016 10:52:00 AM
What a great story! Congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 1/6/2016 12:02:00 PM
Ralph, Congratulations on your win, in Judy Konos Dad contest. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 1/6/2016 5:53:00 AM
Sounds like a wonderful family. I feel so lucky to have experienced just once one of those incredible real Italian Sunday endless dinners with football (soccer) on the tv and bocci after the feast.
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Date: 1/5/2016 8:55:00 PM
None of us ever ask enough questions. Daddy was quiet but he would have told us had we asked. congratulations on a great poem and dad. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/5/2016 4:24:00 PM
Hi Judy: When I saw your contest , I couldn't resist submitting it again. He died in 1978 but to me his memory lives on.
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Date: 1/5/2016 4:08:00 PM
Thank you for being in my contest. Your dad indeed was a War Hero and how wonderful he was able to come home to be with you.....How very wonderful!
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Date: 9/6/2014 4:46:00 PM
Ralph, This was lovely. It seems that you and I both know what it is like to want to say something but never did. I got the chance the week he died, yet STILL I waited until that final day before I could pluck up the courage to read it to him. My only hope is that he heard me. But remember... our fathers only shared what it was they wanted to share. Much remained hidden and unspoken - even by them..... take solace in that :)
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 9/7/2014 4:50:00 PM
Hi Thomas: Regarding your comment, we all have a tendency not to tell our children about our past but I have been writing a journal since 1995 so if I missed anything my kids will have information. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 6/15/2014 12:16:00 PM
Wow! Ralph...this is so beautiful! Like you I often wish I had had more time talking to my father; there are so many things that I wish to know, but now it is too late! If I understand right, your family comes from Italy....beautiful country. cu // paul
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Date: 6/13/2014 8:07:00 AM
Hi Dave: THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT.
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Date: 6/12/2014 7:13:00 AM
Hi Linda: Thank you for your comment,
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Date: 6/11/2014 10:34:00 PM
Ralph, Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA
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Date: 6/10/2014 6:06:00 PM
oh MY. This is just wonderful. If there were not all first places, this one would truly have deserved THE first place I think!!
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Date: 6/10/2014 12:49:00 PM
This is a well captured picture from the memory lane. Good job.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 6/10/2014 1:03:00 PM
Hi Fisayo, nice to know you: Thank you for your comment and for visiting.
Date: 6/9/2014 11:07:00 PM
Nicely done. congrats on the win, Ralph. Soup Mail!!!!!!!!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 6/10/2014 1:01:00 PM
Hi Dr.Ram. Thank you so much. Cn you please tell me or guide me on how to use Soup Mail both replying and receiving. I'm having a problem (raser@bellsouth.net)
Date: 6/9/2014 8:08:00 PM
You have great memories and we all regret that we forgot to ask more questions. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:09:00 PM
Dear Ralph, You are lucky to have such wonderful memories of the stories your father told you as you enjoyed playing cards. He was a hero on the battlefield as well as in the home. Raising six children must have been quite a challenge. When you described how he said he would "bathe you," my eyes filled with tears. His intentions were clear, even if he dwelt upon the past. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 6/10/2014 1:05:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn: I am happy I was in that spirit at that time years ago to write that poem.
Date: 6/9/2014 6:57:00 AM
Hi Doris: Thank you for your comment. HE WAS A GREAT GUY.
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Date: 6/8/2014 10:27:00 PM
A great write.. I wish I had known what's my past straight from him but we only spent time together in a short period of time but my mother always tell me bout him.. Best Wishes in the contest : )
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Date: 6/5/2014 8:25:00 PM
Hi Ralph; this is a good story/poem about father's Day. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest....Lucilla
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Date: 6/4/2014 8:26:00 PM
a beautiful and moving work expressing the love and the meaning of the word Father. He was a very special person indeed.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 6/10/2014 1:06:00 PM
Thanks , Joseph and thanks for visiting.
Date: 6/4/2014 7:30:00 PM
Hi Gail: Thank you for your kind comment.I now keep a journal to record my past, present and future for my grandchildren so they won't forget me and I won't make the same mistake of not asking my dad about his past.
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Date: 6/4/2014 12:18:00 PM
Wow! Lovely write, Ralph...No matter how many questions we ask..when lobed ones are gone we always wish we could ask or say more.....If this is for the contest, good luck my friend...Arlene...
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 6/4/2014 3:04:00 PM
Hi Arlene: THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT.
Date: 6/3/2014 4:05:00 PM
a heart felt poem, a great tribute to your father.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 6/4/2014 7:37:00 PM
Hi Diana: Thank you very much for your kind comment.

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